Peer review blog

After asking several peers we gathered opinion of how people felt about our film. Their responses were constructive which really gave us an Idea of how we can improve our film. People mentioned that they could feel the overall emotion in the battles. The suspenseful moments caught their eye quite quickly upon only just now seeing the characters. The angles were thought out carefully and executed in the right way. The sound effects were relatively as close as possible as can be. The facial expressions gradually shifted all throughout the film. The first 21 seconds of walking took too long. The voices were too low to a certain extent The scenery was rather bright and didn't match the overall aesthetic of the Dialogue between characters. The running in the battle felt a little delayed and too weak The sword was conveniently placed by a tree without any thorough explanation. The impact of the hits during the battle seemed a little more fast forward. The ending had me wondering what would happen next. More emotion could have been put into everything leading up to the fight. The runs felt very stiff. With these complaints I was able to pinpoint our strengths and weaknesses as I myself reviewed through some of the scenes with them. They were honest and gave genuine opinions from their own viewpoint. Some people gave us actual compliments on what they liked and enjoyed throughout our film. Some even complimented the plot and compared it to other thrillers. I was able to establish a good sense of what was good or what needed work on. We have room for improvement.


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